Saturday Short

On Saturdays will shrink the thought process a bit….

Wrote this one in response to another poem featured on Guardian……you must read the poem if you ask me……

Age
The Last Page.
Blast it!
My cataract.

 

 

 

 

© 2011 by neelthemuse

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  1. Checked the original poem, found it closer to prose and too long. Your lines are just the opposite 🙂 Interesting.

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